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The Sorceress Stress Snacking, Size 20 by Westmetal, literature

A Royal Plain by Westmetal, literature

A Royal Exile by Westmetal, literature

The Valkyrie's 7 Deadly Sins: Lust by Westmetal, literature

A Royal Haste by Westmetal, literature

A Royal Quagmire by Westmetal, literature

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[$] The Village Hidden in the Reeds [BBWs/XWG] by BoboTheHoboWrites, literature

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thank you so much for the watch! I love all ur work so it’s a real honor! 🔥🔥

Who ever gave me core, thank you!

do you story requests?

Sorry, no time

Having a debate with myself whether you'd have written BG3 better than the people who actually did.. and I think yeah, you'd probably do a slightly better job because by God that writing was so often cringe and only the pretty sparks, tactical battles and elf girls made up for it.


What a silly little world we live in when a few hundred million $ game doesn't even have the boss put his foot down and hire some good writers. At least Cyberpunk '77 did it, but they fumbled the gameplay. 😭


I don't mean raising Cormac McCarthy from the grave and forcing him to do it via unholy means, just get some guys who've published successful novels to do it.

I like a lot of bg3 but I have an issue that too many rough edges get worn down too quickly.


Especially how Shart never comes to terms with how evil shar is, when all of act 2 is about how evil shar is.


Or how Wyll is... objectively stupid.

Shart

'Shart' is a .. interesting nickname for Shadowheart.🤣 (I'm assuming you don't know what 'shart' means )



Yeah, I'll agree that the party alignment angle seemed under developed.


Even though the motivation on why to stay together till the end was pretty easy.

Ugh, I really don't like the whole "world is going to end, you must save it" type of RPG plot.